As keen as love betrayed, the thorns of broom (The Queen of Elphame’s Villanelle)

Illustration from More English Fairy Tales, drawing by John D. Batten (1894).

As keen as love betrayed, the thorns of broom
sharp stab, the flood of blood a raging red.
You plucked the double rose, you stole the groom.

Did he persuade you with his tale of doom?
Did you believe that Hell-bound he was led?
As keen as love betrayed, the thorns of broom

I saved him from sweet death, undid his tomb
when from his horse I brought him to my bed.
You plucked the double rose, you stole the groom.

While I spin ageless beauty at my loom,
With green and gold you wove a snaring thread
as keen as love betrayed, the thorns of broom.

And now his seed tide wriggles in your womb …
He should have lived unending years, instead
you plucked the double rose, you stole the groom.

Beware, green-kirtled lass, the young man whom
you love, has not a heart of flesh to shred.
As keen as love betrayed, the thorns of broom
You plucked the double rose, you stole the groom.

[Hailing from Zaragoza in North-East Spain, Manuel W Balaguer-Cortés has been living in Scotland for over two decades. His writing meanders around the world of nature and that of sacred myth, and it is informed by a Pagan Polytheist spirituality. He also plays European traditional music on a number of weird woodwind instruments. His work can be found in various British and American publications and he was shortlisted for the 2015 Poetic Republic Poetry Competition.]

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